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Sonic Duality - ARC 1 - Issue 1 pg 05

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 MEANWHILE, AT THE HALL OF THE SUPER BEST FRIENDS
Uh, I mean.. Robotropolis...

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Well, this seems pretty good so far. Only six pages to speak of, but this comic seems more presentable than most of the competition. I'm glad to see you're taking the time to draw cartoon-accurate backgrounds. Sally looks rather off-model in the fourth panel, but at least Bunnie and Rotor come off much better.

A couple of things you might want to fix, though. First, try and keep a standard page size instead of changing dimensions throughout the comic. Second, your speech bubbles could use some improvement. The tails are way too long and most seem to curve only at the end. You don't need to have each tail pointing explicitly pointing at the speaker's mouth; readers can perceive who's talking easily enough. Use shorter tails for speech bubbles in future.